Sunday, 16 June 2013

We have been extending our sentences. We began with....... Joe broke his toe. Have a read of Matthew's extended version. Joe was in a mood, a bad mood. He slouched down the hall into his room where he threw his teddy across the room. It hit the ground with a dull thud. He sighed, he got up and kicked the wall. Then he fell over clutching his foot in agony. He learnt never to do it again.
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  1. Room 2018 June 2013 at 17:21

    Bonjourno Room 17! Wow Matthew, you have used lots of interesting words. Great job! It gives readers a good picture in their heads. How did you think of all of those good describing words? Have a happy day and live smart, from Room 20. (PS we are learning to write effective comments on blogs)

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  2. Amy room2018 June 2013 at 20:42

    Hi room 17

    good describing Matthew how did you learn how to do good story's

    from Amy room 20

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  3. Kate Flanagan28 July 2013 at 22:50

    wow!!! (;

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  4. Kate Flanagan28 July 2013 at 22:53

    remember down the back of the chair!!!!?

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